It was a rainy day in Bangalore when I got off the bus to
wait for him to come and pick me up. I had mixed feelings as it was the first
time I am going to meet Sid as his girl friend. We have been friends for over 3
years and I know everything about him but today was something different I was
not feeling the way I used to when I was going to meet him. Afterall, we are
not friends anymore. 'Pri, do you think we should get married?' he had asked a
couple of weeks ago. I loved the way he asked it! No hesitation or fear of
rejection it was a very simple question. That is him, very simple and
outspoken. How will a girl deny the proposal of her best friend? I said yes!
From then we had been planning to meet each other, it is a difficult task for
us as I lived in Chennai and him in Bangalore. Distance played the villain role
in our relationship. From the day we declared our love for each other we have
been talking all day and night! What would have happened to long distance
couples if cell phones and internet was not invented?
I saw him in a distance and my heart raced, excitement
filled my mind I clenched my bag tighter. I waved so he can identify me; he
parked his bike and smiled at me. I kept looking at him, How much gifted I am
to have him in my life! he took the bag from me and said, 'Hey girlfriend!
Finally you are here. I cannot believe it!’ He guffawed.
'Yes! I missed you' I said immediately. We drove to his
place. It was a single bedroom apartment which had minimal furniture and a cot
in the bedroom. It was a typical bachelor's house with clothes scattered
everywhere, posters of Liverpool, AC/DC and Sachin adorned the walls, a dusted
TV that was not cleaned from the time it was bought.
'You can keep your stuff in the room; let me buy something
for us to eat. It's raining heavily and I don't want to take you out or do you
want to go out?' He asked.
'No! I am tired. I lay on the bed. Let’s just have some
biscuits don't go! Come here!' I sat up and pulled him to sit next to me.
'Are you crazy? You should have dinner!' He said sitting
next me. We maintained a considerable amount of distance. I ignored him talking
about the dinner.
'I was waiting to reach home! Long day and I thought I will
never get a ticket.' I paused and saw him, 'I sat in the last row of the bus
god! It was tortuous! but it's worth it!’ I smiled. He was still keenly
listening to me. I immediately realized
that I started my nonstop rambling and made the conversation a monologue but
still continued that's my speciality, 'I am happy I am here! sitting next to
you talking about my experience!' He smiled and a dimple appeared on his
cheeks. I wanted to ruffle his hair and hug him tight but just smiled.
'I had a worse experience, When I was in college I travelled
to Ranchi from Bhubaneshwar sitting on top of the bus. But that was enjoyable.
Me and my friends.. We had lots of fun! It’s tough to get bus tickets during
vacation. So it's like you are OK with anything at the moment' He talks as much
as I do so it is always compensated. We kept talking and talking when we
realized it was 2.30 AM. I didn't want
to go to sleep. Our shoulders brushed each other’s every now and then; he
touched my hand while trying to explain something that happened in his college.
He had bigger tales to say than mine and I never got bored with it. And then
there was a moment of silence we listened to the sound of rain outside.
'So girlfriend... you don't want to sleep?' He asked stroking
the hair that had fallen over my cheeks. For the first time in my life I
blushed. I loved the way he called me girlfriend. It gave me an entirely
different feeling. 'I am feeling very cold!' I smiled and looked away from him.
'Hey come out with me do you want to feel how freezing it is
outside?' he jumped off the bed excited. He took my hand and pulled me to the
balcony. My cheeks froze and the floor was as cold as ice, I immediately
regretted for leaving my slippers in the room. The weather was freezing yet
enjoyable. A swift stroke of wind brushed the trees which sprinkled water on
our faces.
'God! It's freezing Sidharth!' I said my teeth cluttering
and rubbed my palm. I felt his hand around my waist and his chin on my
shoulder. My heart skipped a beat, it was not cold anymore!
'Sweet heart! I love you. Will you be with me forever!' he whispered
in my ears. I turned to see him. His eyes shined from the light that came from
the street lights.
‘I will!' I smiled and the next moment I felt his lips on
mine, so soft and gentle. I gasped for breathe and closed my eyes tight; I was
able to feel the blood gushing onto my face. My heart beat faster than ever. He
held me closer and smiled at me. I hugged him, I never felt so protected in my
life. I knew I was in safe hands and life is going to be bright from then!
Aww :">. Just a nice story :).
ReplyDeleteJust loved reading it.
It was warm :).
The feelings and those moments :) Wow. You have explained them in such a perfect way Di :) :D.
This is my most favorite post of yours :D :). I know you have a post about Hot Guys :P :D. And as much as I love each and every one of them, this post touched my heart :) :D.
I have ONE DOUBT though :P ;). Will ask you elsewhere ;) :D
wonderful narration... lovely flow!
ReplyDeletelovely lovely lovely gayathri
ReplyDeletevery nice and expressive... :)
ReplyDeleten from that day our Gaa has forgotten her appetite and her company cudnt get her complete concentration :P... U r lucky Gaa... Maaaiiiiiiinnnnnd Blowing :), wishing you both lots of happiness
ReplyDeleteGreat! You kept holding it from us till the very end! It is a cute, well written piece.
ReplyDeleteCute story. Seriously cute. Reading it from a perspective of girl made it more enjoyable. Like it :) :)
ReplyDeleteLovely....very well written!
ReplyDeleteAWWW! So so adorable! Love it!! :)
ReplyDelete@Poo - Thanks a lot sweetie!! :) I know what you are going to ask me... Will discuss about it when I come to bangalore.. :P
ReplyDelete@Magiceye - Thank you.. :)
@Latha - Thanks a lot!!
@Vineet - Thank you! :)
Hey Sri... lol naawww... I always stay focussed at work no divertion..!! :D :P Thanks a lot...!! :)
@Umashankar - That's what made you read it through the end..!! Thanks a lot... :)
@Prasoon - Thanks a lot!! :)
@Abhishek - Thank you.. :)
@Jen - carts of thanks! :)
very sweet....
ReplyDeleteReally impressed by you work.Why don't you set up a proper blogging site?You've great thoughts and you should make your online presence count.Check out my personal site "sreekanthpillai.besticious.com" and do let me know if you interested.See you.Keep blogging:)
ReplyDeletelovely :)
ReplyDelete@Santa - Thank you! :)
ReplyDeleteHey Taurus! Thank you.. :)
ReplyDelete@Sree - Thanks a lot! :) I will definitely check your blog.. :) Thanks a lot for your comments and visit..!! I will surely think about have a proper blogging site for me.. :) Thanks a lot again for your comments! :)
ReplyDeleteHahaha :D :P.
ReplyDeleteCome soon Di :P :D.
Can't wait to ask ;) :D
Hey Gayathri,
ReplyDeleteThats a heartfelt romance. Gr8 going.
Keep writing waiting for more.
Keep blogging cos thats how we r connected . :)
Your story captivated me to follow your blog.
Cynthia Vincent
@Poo - lol.. OK my dear super curious li'l sisy... this story is fictious and not connected to my life.. If that's what you wanted to know.. :D :P
ReplyDelete@Cynthia - Thanks a ton! Sure I will keep blogging..!! :) Hoping to see more from you too..! :)
ReplyDeleteIts nice...:-)
ReplyDelete@Sharu - Thank you! :)
ReplyDeleteAww! Such a sweet post... I was just imagining the things which were going in sequence... :D Just loved reading it.... The FIRST KISS! hope you enjoyed ! ?? :P :P :D
ReplyDeletePS - I'm waiting for my days to come.. :P lol xD :P :P :D ;)
wow , warm and easy !!!
ReplyDeletesuperb writing !
vooww..!! such a beautiful post. m lovin it n njoyed reading it :) keep going girl!!
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