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Thursday 17 May 2012

The Emptiness


So happy, so exhilarated,
Still the emptiness prevails,
So bright and shining,
Yet the darkness continues,
I laugh, I make fun,
Yet my heart cries,
I talk, I listen,
Yet I crave to share,
I have friends,
Yet I am alone,
I have a clear mind,
Yet confused,
So lifeless and dead within,
Yet joyful and lively I am
This is me and my life
Hope is my only hope
I long, I covet, I wait
Only to realize the truth
Life changes as time goes
People come and go
But the emptiness prevails
The scar remains
And I will miss you forever!
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20 comments:

  1. Vishal Kataria17 May 2012 at 10:08

    Lovely rhyme.

    Captures the emotions of those who yearn for someone they can never have.

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    1. Gayathri17 May 2012 at 20:05

      Thank you Vishal! :) Very true it was written only on that note! :)

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  2. Thoughts Synchronized17 May 2012 at 11:51

    So beautifully described Gayathri! The best thing about it is that it is written in a simple manner yet is so effective! :)

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  3. Ruchita17 May 2012 at 12:05

    Very nicely Penned

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  4. Saru Singhal17 May 2012 at 17:44

    Very emotional and at times we can't figure the reason, can't come to a logical answer. Beautifully written!

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    1. Gayathri17 May 2012 at 20:07

      Yea Saru! Sometimes we cannot figure out what happens to us or what we are going through... Thanks a lot! A lovely poet appreciating my poem is something BIG to me! :)

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  5. Santhosh Gokulabalan17 May 2012 at 20:18

    Excellent...

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  6. Anupam Patra17 May 2012 at 20:36

    Lovely piece of work Gayathri. There's something I wrote a few days back. A poetry titled "Lessons of Life". Read it. You might find it relevant. Here's the link. http://anupampatracontemplates.blogspot.in/2012/04/lessons-of-life.html

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    1. Gayathri22 May 2012 at 21:59

      Thank you and sure Anupam I will check that! :)

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  7. TalesinPixels18 May 2012 at 18:47

    so nice n touching....

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  8. Sakshi Shioramwar18 May 2012 at 19:12

    it was a nice read!!

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  9. SATYA LAKSHMI18 May 2012 at 22:22

    SPEECHLESS

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  10. Gayathri22 May 2012 at 22:00

    Thank you

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  11. Kudus24 May 2012 at 14:21

    Good write-up ! depicts the pain of missing someone

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    1. Gayathri24 May 2012 at 18:37

      :) Yes! That's what it is :) Thank you Kudus!

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