When you left me,
You took my soul away.
Roaming around the streets,
I found no way to retreat,
Boundless reasons to cry,
Endless moments in solace,
Hope was nowhere to be found.
Dying is not a brave thing,
What will I do in a world without you?
where will I find a person like you?
Out in the rain,
I stand in pain,
Holding your ring,
I will never leave you,
I heard you whisper,
but why did you leave me?
I whispered to air,
I knelt down,
Memories washed me away,
As my dreams faded,
I vanished into thin air,
I saw a body lying on the wet floor,
holding the ring tight!
first i wondered what is it all about.. unrequited love....breakup... then as the words folded...i realized its many things.....nice !!
ReplyDeleteStraight drive again..
ReplyDeleteloved and felt it :)
Painful and the agony is worded perfectly in these lines,
ReplyDelete"Out in the rain
I stand in pain"
Beautiful expression!
oh this was so beautiful and touching...very well written gaythri:) alka narula
ReplyDelete@Shooting Star - Thank you for the visit! :)
ReplyDelete@Dee - I was wondering who soul was and from the straight dive comment made out its you.. Thank you!
ReplyDelete@Saru - Thanks a lot.. something like this from a great poetess like you makes me feel good..!! :) Thank you for the visit..! :)
ReplyDelete"you took my soul away" i could so feel it Gayathri. you said such a lot in so simple words :)
ReplyDeleteawesome :)
WOW is all I can say Di :).
ReplyDeleteJust loved it :)
@Kirti - Thank you Kirti..!! :)
ReplyDelete@Poo - Thanks a lot poo.. :D
ReplyDeleteHats off.....!
ReplyDeleteonly word i can say after reading it. :)